Music magazine front cover
negatives:
1. Most people said that I did not select a font which would suitable in attracting my target audience.
2. They also said that the font I used looked simple and "default", and that it would not fit any type of music magazine.
3. Some people said that my model/subjects facial expression should have been more fierce and confident.
positives:
1. People sid that they liked the vibrant colours in the background. Nyle said; "They grab your attention and draw you right in!".
2. David said; I like how that guy is dressed in casual clothes, these days all dem models on music magazines have eccentric clothing on, but thats not the case in real life".
Negatives:
1. There was roughly a balanced amount of people who felt that the vector (cartoon image) of my model was enough, and that there was no need for the bubbles.
2. Some people repeated the criticism that the font I used for the category names could have been more creative.
Positives:
1. People liked the vector image of my friend, although many said that I should have edited it more in photoshop so that it as more colourful and creative.
Negatives:
1. Some friends agreed that my double page spread looked dull, and that it did not catch their attention enough.
2. Allot of people said that i should have taken better photographs of my two models, making them look more "in you're face".
Positives:
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